Descriptive Personal Narrative Story - 1011 Words

It was a brisk fall morning at 4 o’clock, and I walked into the cold, stale hospital terrified. I was a brown haired, brown eyed 5-year-old wearing gray pajamas covered in blue, yellow and red race cars. I was scared and unsure of what was about to happen. I asked my mom, â€Å"What wong me?† Of course, she knew that meant, â€Å"What’s wrong with me?† â€Å"You are having a surgery but you will be alright,† she responded calmly. I was confused as to why she was so calm, while I was so worried about being in the hospital. I sat on a bed with silver rails on it like a giant crib. The light blue blanket lay across my lap while the nurses gave me medications to help me sleep. I clung tightly to my lime green alligator with all my might. Things were†¦show more content†¦My mom sang lullabies and continued rocking, but the emotion kept flowing. Maybe it was the excitement of what was to come, maybe it was the loss of what was or maybe even fear of the unknown. Finally, the tears stopped and I slept in the warm embrace of the mom who said she would be right there waiting for me. I was born with a hearing issue and I was unable to hear what others said to me which did not give me much of a voice the first few years of my life. This made life difficult for several reasons. Making friends was something I struggled with due to my inability to hear or respond. As I grew older I started to make up my own language using sounds and actions to communicate with my parents. I would make a sound and my parents would know based on what I pointed at what I was talking about. This was how I communicated with them until after the surgery. They always said, â€Å"You created your very own language and your family learned it.† I was easily frustrated because people treated me like I was dumb. When I couldn’t get my point across or people couldn’t understand me, I would get very angry. When my little brother could communicate better than me, it made me want to hurt him because it seemed so unfair. I couldn’t seem to grasp why everything was so much harder for me. I went to speech therapy for over two years. There was little progress with my sounds. My therapists worked very hard with me each week to help me form words but my brain couldn’tShow MoreRelatedDescriptive Personal Narrative Story1438 Words   |  6 PagesI had woke up to the tranquility of a Sunday night there was a slight breeze, It was May 29th, 2016 around eight p.m. I was alone and confused in a poorly, lit living room. I stared into these white walls that were so bright it felt as if you were staring into snow, I was stuck and could only think, â€Å"I just have to organize all my things for tomorrow before I fall back asleep.†   I sat there on my couch tired from the late night before. 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